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Haiku

at last, the scorching sun says a good night, like the stormy seas of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/6/2011 5:16:00 PM
I find this form difficult but you did a great write with perfect 5 7 5 and imagery. Nicely done.
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:34:00 PM
I like this analogy of life to stormy seas and scorching sun, INgibo. Where do you write? AT your house? Or do you go somewhere different?
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Date: 8/27/2011 12:55:00 PM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Ingibo. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2011 10:37:00 AM
Lovely haiku with nice images, Ingibo
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