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Haiku 32

heavy summer rain, owing his son thousands - Monopoly money

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2020 4:34:00 PM

Where I come from farmers are not pleased with summer rain...it's like monopoly money - not worth anything! Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/3/2020 12:28:00 PM

Interesting! I can't imagine why that would be a bad thing for farmers ... rain for the crops and all that (maybe over-watering is bad just like under-watering is?).

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2013 12:17:00 AM

awww, this is SO SWEET and GOOD ONE

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/25/2013 9:24:00 AM

Thanks Andrea... you've read quite a lot of my haiku!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/24/2013 10:28:00 PM

7 a must. fantastic. " the best line is Monopoly money. Yes it does. Thank you for you comments on my poems. Look at MY first ABC. True critic always come from you. I appreciate Manel

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/24/2013 10:57:00 PM

I'm glad you appreciate my comments (and thanks for the high rating... it means a lot). Whenever I read someone else's work by main concern is honesty and encouragement...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2013 3:23:00 PM

- Feel good with all that money .... the feeling of being rich in a rain day. - Well done my friend Timothy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/24/2013 10:56:00 PM

Feeling rich on a rainy day - well said (and quite poetic, I might add).

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/24/2013 10:28:00 AM

Monopoly isn't my game... but when it's raining outside and nothing better to do... why not bust out a board game? Thanks for the feedback everyone!

Caleah Buil

Date: 5/24/2013 9:53:00 AM

Ha! This was good. Monopoly isn't my forte, but I do owe my brother a lot in money. :P Good Haiku!

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/24/2013 6:26:00 AM

Another brilliant haiku. Monopoly money--- so accurately metaphorical.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/24/2013 2:12:00 AM

:) Never been good with money...or Monopoly! As to rain....aw....LOVE IT! ;)