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haiku 30

held tight within
the arms of the maker --
light escapes through cracks

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 4:51:00 PM
    i like the use of senses you employed in this haiku. Thanks for your comments.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one..Very creative thinking..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..The scene of peace was really not one of fear for I heard the animals which indicated that all was well..We did get rain that night..

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 9:46:00 AM
    love it!!! Keep it up Debbie, and thanks so much for entering Poetic Possibilities's winter haiku contest! I'll get back to you if you won or placed soon! Check back on the site often for updates on prizes, dates, etc. and enter other contests! We just created a new freewrite contest I think you'd do very well in! :D