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Haiku 2

Grey forlorn Mountain Wind howls in defiant rage Crowned with bitter ice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/18/2016 4:30:00 AM
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Mountains do seem to contain such power. I enjoyed the personalization in your haiku Shane. ; )
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 6/2/2016 2:30:00 PM
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An impressive write, Shane! Fantastic imagery, I can feel the icy wind while looking at that jagged "forlorn Mountain". Not at all a tea party place, Alice wearing a parka? Love this write. Hugs to you, Mikki
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/1/2016 2:46:00 PM
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Oh I like that description-"crowned with bitter ice"
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2016 7:32:00 AM
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stunning imagery and image Shane:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/27/2016 8:45:00 PM
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strong imagery.
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