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Haiku 27

This haiku has been deleted due to possible publication. NOTE: I know I don't typically go artsy-fartsy with my haiku (wax eloquent as Eileen Ghali would call it). But in this case the sky was being too beautiful to NOT go overboard with the descriptions...

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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/14/2013 9:44:00 AM
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I like it!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/14/2013 2:02:00 PM
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Thanks Rick... It's one I really enjoy myself...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 2:33:00 AM
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- Oh .... just beautiful! - Have a nice day my friend Timothy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/14/2013 2:03:00 PM
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You as well! You seem to check up on almost all my haiku... It makes me happy that you're such a fan! :D
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/14/2013 12:57:00 AM
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Beautiful :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/14/2013 2:04:00 AM
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Appreciate your visit, Sasha... stop by anytime!
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Donna Jones
Date: 5/13/2013 1:45:00 PM
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Heavens cottonfield! Awesome!!!!!!!!! This made me take a deep breath!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/14/2013 2:03:00 AM
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Thank you Donna! I was particularly happy when I thought of the phrase... glad you liked it!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/13/2013 8:38:00 AM
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BRILLIANT! I'll say it again, BRILLIANT! You continue to amaze me each day!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/13/2013 12:41:00 PM
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Thank you so much Jack. I know you're not much of a haiku type person, but I'm pleased you enjoy it! :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/13/2013 7:16:00 AM
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Great imagery revealed in your poem, Timothy! You can never wax too eloquent for me.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/13/2013 12:40:00 PM
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Well you are very eloquent yourself, my friend! :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/13/2013 6:38:00 AM
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I know... what an inspiration the sky and heavens can be-- lovely descriptive used here. You have put me into Haiku thinking mode :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/13/2013 12:40:00 PM
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Thanks for stopping by Kim!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/12/2013 11:57:00 PM
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This is very beautiful..Making me visualize the view Timothy...Charma
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/13/2013 12:39:00 PM
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Thank you Charmaine!
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Robert Pettit
Date: 5/12/2013 10:42:00 PM
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I'm impressed with this. Good job.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2013 10:43:00 PM
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Thanks Robert... glad you liked!

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