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Haiku 27

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Haiku 27

	Sea and sigh whispers.
	As water rolls, the waves fall
	dark and velvety.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:04:00 AM
    ... dark and velvety... adored that last line! Makes me think of fresh coffee in the morning (wonder what that's like to swim in?)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/22/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Especially with cream. J
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 5:50:00 PM
    always writing beautiful haiku , are you!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/21/2013 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, but not always beautiful. I've got one coming up that is far from it. I've become fascinated by the form, and just checked eight books on haiku out of the university library. The possible variations are amazing, including Jack Kerouac's and William S. Burroughs'.
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Very interesting Haiku..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/21/2013 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for dropping by, Sara. Jack
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 11:09:00 AM
    Beautiful Jack....

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 3/22/2013 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks...and all four siblings and i have weird yellowish green eyes but they change colors by mood like mood rings...
    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/21/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Donna. Interesting new photo. The eyes have it... Jack