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where dinosaurs roam twisted carnival re-do my luck just ran out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/31/2011 3:48:00 PM
wow this ones deep OOPS dino poo? ;) LOL Light & Love
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:56:00 PM
A very interesting one that makes ya think! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:04:00 PM
I had to read this several times. I love haiku such as this. Where you can pull meaning out of it slowly. Splendid writing. Especially the last line.
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:42:00 PM
Lovely haiku with great images of dinosaurs, James, Jimbo
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Date: 1/11/2011 4:41:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with creative work of art..Your presence at my work brought me a ray of sunshine this eve..Sara
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