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Haiku 25

shining through darkness light shimmering on water reflection of moon Entry: "Any Poem goes~" contest of P.D. Written by: Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 12:09:00 PM

I think this is very uplifting. Love SKAT

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/13/2012 4:13:00 AM

nature is so pleasant and beautiful .thank you for sharing a colorful moment from the wide canvas of nature .jk

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:26:00 AM

I really need to learn how to write some Haiku

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/19/2012 10:34:00 AM

Wow! Wonderfully snapped with wonderful imagination, loved much and enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/13/2012 11:18:00 PM

congrats on your super win,dear carol, and more cheers to you for all the recent placements.. having TPS technical problems, awwwh!..:) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2012 5:58:00 AM

Thank you P.D. Thank you to all who commented. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2012 10:04:00 PM

Carol, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 11:47:00 AM

aweeee.... i like the image here... now go shine your beautiful words,,in my latest poem... yuppp..thank you for your congratulations... my poem needs your reflection... luv~ always* your little PD ** tickle tickle...

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2012 5:48:00 AM

A beautiful picture Carol. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Do You Write A Lot?

Date: 3/24/2012 5:49:00 PM

I love Haiku, great poem

Leila Mijares

Date: 3/20/2012 6:36:00 PM

Perfect haiku...^-^

Richard Mcclellan

Date: 3/20/2012 2:28:00 PM

Beautiful Carol, reminds me of fishing in May....

Talena Alienmermaid

Date: 3/16/2012 7:41:00 AM

Beautiful - you capture moonlight in this poem!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/12/2012 4:51:00 PM

Yes, I certainly know that Gail's talking about in her comment, I too can visualize this poem as if I am there! I just love poems about the moon and it's moon light! You have do magnificently with this write here Carol! I really enjoyed this write in all it's splendor! I love your work of art my friend! Great Work!!