Haiku 22

nighttime hammock - the warmth of stars in my puppies eyes

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 5/12/2013 2:40:00 PM

Very comforting and tender write, Timothy.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2013 9:52:00 PM

My dog is very special to me and he always makes sleep more enjoyable.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2013 12:23:00 PM

this is SO CUTE. I just LOVE it, timothy and in my opinion, what a haiku is all about.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2013 12:20:00 AM

Awww I'm glad you liked it! Last summer I spent 12 nights in a row, sleeping outside in the hammock... my dog would always sleep me with, while on occasion I'd browse around on my Kindle Fire. Fun times :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/8/2013 8:41:00 AM

A puppie warms any situation. I like your Haiku

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2013 12:19:00 AM

He's not literally a puppy, but pomeranians remain so small they might as well be. The one I have is really unique for he's solid black.