Haiku 22

The peace of this place, the voice of sun on your lips. I now know beauty.

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Date: 3/13/2013 5:37:00 PM

You seem to know romance quite well, Jack, very lovely haiku

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/13/2013 5:54:00 PM

I'm not so sure that I do, but I enjoy writing about it. I enjoy the emotional potential. Jack

Date: 3/9/2013 8:20:00 PM

"The voice of sun on your lips" excellent sentence. The thing is I can actually picture it. Thank you Mr Jordan for these beautiful words.

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/9/2013 9:10:00 PM

You're welcome, and thank you for reading it. Jack

Date: 3/9/2013 4:00:00 PM

Beautiful Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/9/2013 4:31:00 PM

Thanks, Donna. Have a good weekend. Jack

Date: 3/9/2013 11:58:00 AM

GORGEOUS! - Thank you Jack! . Have a beautifully weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/9/2013 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I hope you enjoyed Turkey, and that you too have a great weekend. Jack

Date: 3/9/2013 11:05:00 AM

I LOVE this.

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/9/2013 11:35:00 AM

Well, thanks! And happy Saturday to you. Jack