Haiku 20

a white plastic bag flutters in a bare tree -- the sound of geese

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Robert Johnson

Date: 11/20/2012 12:48:00 PM

Evolution revolution, the times they are a changin'. The sights and sounds of yesterday are always rearrangin'. I have a cousin who's mentally handicapped. Who used to wave an empty wonder bread bag in the wind for what seemed like forever.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 10:25:00 PM

I like the visual, Debs! *and the honk honk honk!!!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/19/2012 1:00:00 PM

Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, Vivid imagery a Superb Haiku All the signs of winter coming I thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments and for showing my Work to others on this site LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/19/2012 12:33:00 PM

Nice picture of nature in this fine Asian style poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

David Williams

Date: 11/19/2012 11:29:00 AM

Debbie those pesky bags are everywhere, love it...thought of you many a time drinking a cuppa all on my own..David

Rollo West

Date: 11/19/2012 11:23:00 AM

Hi Debbie, this is a really great Haiku, love the imagery. Rollo