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Haiku 1

Bamboo dappled light Moss path down from the grove Headstones lean and fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/2/2013 11:52:00 PM
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hello Jack.:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 8/16/2013 6:09:00 PM
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Deep, Jack.... reads like a forgotten graveyard... sad imagery... Linda
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 6:18:00 PM
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Actually, it was far more beautiful than sad. It's just me, I know, but cemeteries aren't sad places to me for the most part. As a child I spent many Sundays at my father's grave with my mother, and learned to drive (in the cemetery) while she visited my dad.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/21/2013 8:24:00 PM
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Love the haiku, glad you liked my caturday haiku's,,,, you have a great day
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/21/2013 9:41:00 PM
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Thanks! You too... Jack
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David Williams
Date: 1/20/2013 8:30:00 AM
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Jack, a great image...welcome..David
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Jack Jordan
Date: 1/20/2013 9:19:00 AM
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Thanks for the comment and the welcome. I'm beginning to fel at home. Jack
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 11:35:00 AM
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Nicely written,Jack !!!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 1/19/2013 4:43:00 PM
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Thanks! I appreciate the comment. I hope you have a fine weekend too.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2013 10:31:00 AM
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Great imagery in your haiku, Jack. Love, Kim
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Jack Jordan
Date: 1/19/2013 4:44:00 PM
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment. Jack
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/19/2013 10:09:00 AM
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I so dislike seeing headstones fallen or leaning askew in old parts of a cemetary. Souls long forgotten... enjoyed your poem.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 1/19/2013 4:46:00 PM
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Thanks for the comment. I too feel sadness in old cemeteries, especially those stones marking babies and children who died much too young. Jack

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