Haiku 19

Twigs scratch your window Pull your covers close and tight No breeze blows tonight Gene Bourne. 03-16-14 .

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2014 5:10:00 PM

You are great at haiku-Exceptional!!Tnks for the beautiful comment on my Magnolia poem.

Gene Bourne
Date: 8/2/2014 8:39:00 PM

Hi, Charmaine....'There's a big Magnolia in our back yard. We've never trimmed it, so you can walk under it. The traditional way is to leave the limbs untrimmed and let them skirt the ground. Thanks for your comment on my Haiku. Your PS friend, Gene.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2014 5:50:00 PM

oooh, kinda scary!!! Let me see one more haiku of yours. I just love finding poets with haiku.

Gene Bourne

Date: 6/28/2014 12:03:00 PM

NOTE...I hurriedly revised line one and failed to alter a word. My apologies to the first 12 readers who found 6, rather than the corrected 5 syllables in line one. Everything's OK now....:>) Your PS friend..... Gene

Leon Enriquez

Date: 6/28/2014 10:54:00 AM

Dear Gene: Very nice fragment moment. Leon

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/28/2014 11:51:00 AM

Dear Leon...Thanks so much for your comment on this "creepy" Haiku. Have a great weekend.....Your PS friend....Gene.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/28/2014 7:54:00 AM

- A skilled haiku - .... listen ..... it scratch on the window pane ... no wind - Have a great weekend, Gene. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/28/2014 8:41:00 AM

Thanks, Anne Lise, for your comments....kinda creepy, this Haiku. You have a super weekend, as well. YF.....Gene.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/28/2014 12:25:00 AM

Apt images well crafted haiku, Gene

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/28/2014 7:49:00 AM

Dr.Mehta...Thanks for your comments. They are most They are most appreciated. I look forward to reading your posts..... Your PS friend, Gene.