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haiku 18

laughter fills
the air as fireworks burst --
flower petal trails

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:42:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:01:00 PM
    I like it BUT ( I always feel like a shmuck for saying BUT) I wonder if there is a way to leave out the word flower... perhaps a type of flower... I am not certain if anything other than flowers have petals. :) Hey, hope you enter my contest. I can't wait to see all the different entries! Its midnight. Must get to bed! xox Dee

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/13/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes of course it would be fine to say the type of flower BUt since so many different types of flower petals are used...I let the reader decide..
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:10:00 PM
    I will pick 2 tomorrow and enter. Thank u !!! Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:52:00 PM
    So nice to read you today. It's a perfect Haiku. Hugs Michael