Haiku 17

in the rain a clown walks home - rainbow tears

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Date: 7/19/2016 2:54:00 PM

Awwww, no! I've got a big rainbow umbrella to share! (: Always, Laura

Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 9:09:00 PM

Hahaha ... I'll be looking out for that rainbow ;)

Date: 4/10/2013 3:37:00 AM

Timothy, thanks for the great haiku - I like it, well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/10/2013 3:45:00 AM

Thanks again Anne!

Date: 3/29/2013 5:02:00 PM

oh this is so cute!! Did you ever hear the song Tears of a clown. It seems to be inspired by that song!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/10/2013 3:19:00 AM

No I haven't... but I'm glad you liked my haiku. This one, surprisingly, had to be re-written and revised quite a lot.

Date: 3/25/2013 12:53:00 PM

This is so clever and creative! Love it!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/10/2013 3:18:00 AM

Thanks Heather!