Haiku 17

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Then we lighted up diyas.

small clay lamps line the edge of the rooftop -- sweets melt on my tongue *SEE ABOUT the POEM

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 6:43:00 AM

Good one!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 4:03:00 PM

Ahhhh very nice Debbie. !!! So enjoy your Haiku's today. Hugs Michael

Rollo West

Date: 11/12/2012 2:55:00 PM

Hi Debbie. Okay, now I need some sweets. Great write Debbie. Rollo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2012 2:42:00 PM

this one I like even better! sure love those sweets. Hey, that would be great if you mentioned a sunset with that last line, kind of relating it to the melting down of the sun!