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haiku 17

small clay lamps
line the edge of the rooftop --
sweets melt on my tongue


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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Good one!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Ahhhh very nice Debbie. !!! So enjoy your Haiku's today. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:55:00 PM
    Hi Debbie. Okay, now I need some sweets. Great write Debbie. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:42:00 PM
    this one I like even better! sure love those sweets. Hey, that would be great if you mentioned a sunset with that last line, kind of relating it to the melting down of the sun!