Haiku 14

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2013 8:37:00 AM

This is very pretty. Have a wonderful weekend.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2013 9:13:00 AM

You as well, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 12:14:00 AM

I get the feeling she has love on her mind or something new in her life that is making her glow. Did I come close? Also, to tell you, I can't believe I did not mention vampires in my suck poem. How did I let THAT slide?? (all that work I did on that poem and I got nuttin' in the contest. hahaha)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2013 12:24:00 AM

That is funny about the vampires... that's the first thing that came to mind when I read your title! So far I've only submitted once into the contest (my fingers are crossed, haha)...

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2013 12:22:00 AM

To be honest this just came to me one day (I know that doesn't sound very profound, but that's way poetry is sometimes... something just POPPED in your head... lol). Your interpretation is lovely... when I wrote this I was like "what's more romantic that the discussion of the moon and a girls eyes?"