Haiku 12

a goldfinch feasts among the ripe concord grapes -- purple stains my lips

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/21/2012 11:33:00 PM

I like this ,,, The more I read your haiku 's ,,, the more I'm seeing/ understanding the lay-out ;} I'm going to post a few of mine soon. After I go over them,,, then you can tell me if they are "real / proper" thank you for your kind words on my poem ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2012 9:27:00 PM

I just love this one. GREAT picture shown.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2012 6:47:00 AM

Cute one..I can just see you eating the grapes..We have muscadines ripe now..The ants feed there all the time with the wasp, hornets, and other creatures..Sara

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/20/2012 6:08:00 AM

Yummy haiku Debbie! Big purple hugs, Jack xox

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/20/2012 5:16:00 AM

mmmm.....grape pie w/concords......eneway......this is the best haiku I have seen in quite some time......line 3 .....too good.......to my faves.....oh, thanks for yer comments.....my feelings are vulnerable regards to my work! yimmy