Haiku

the torn screen door is held open by her foot... a brief August storm ______________________ 5/29/18

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P.M. Richter

Date: 5/5/2019 10:20:00 PM

Beautiful haiku :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2018 9:40:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, Carrie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 4:56:00 PM

NICE!! Congrats, dear Carrie.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the summer haiku contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Carrie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/2/2018 6:51:00 AM

A lucky winner for this was n/a'ed I had missed the date and if it had not been for the fact I had made another oversight this one would have been still in a n/a cell. So a lucky but well deserved congratulations Carrie. Mick

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2018 4:46:00 AM

I like this, Carrie! Says more than one thing! Nicely done!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2018 4:26:00 AM

I agree with Line this could be open to different interpretations Carrie as I initially thought of a stormy relationship:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/29/2018 10:15:00 PM

Awesome imagery and limitless interpretations, Carrie. Wonderful.