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old lady's veil weeps memories too deep to hold waterlily pond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/22/2018 12:15:00 PM
Okay, Virginia, clearly you are an experienced haiku poet! Your talent is reflected in this lovely waterlily pond! Beautiful work! Hugs. Pandita
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Virginia Waters
Date: 5/23/2018 1:11:00 AM
thank you all, I am honing my skills in haiku and was happy with this one too.
Date: 5/19/2018 4:24:00 AM
I also like this one....well done
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Date: 5/17/2018 7:15:00 PM
I like this.
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