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haiku on moonlit ocean whales dive into silver waves - exploding harpoons 05-07-2018 Contest: Haiga/Haiku - Theme The Sea/Ocean 5-7-5 Sponsor: Mick Talbot Placement: 2nd

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/28/2019 8:15:00 AM

How sad. Put true.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/28/2019 9:43:00 AM

Hi Allen, thank you for visiting and leaving me your response! Best wishes. Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 7/2/2018 1:18:00 PM

Oh the picture...think that...allow me to say It's souper great. Regards>rajat

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/2/2018 1:39:00 PM

Hi Rajat, I very much appreciate your nice compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:05:00 PM

a well deserved win, Pandita and one of my favorites on the list. Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:14:00 PM

Dear Andie, thank you my friend for your support and kind comments which I appreciate! Hugs. Pandita

Moon Flower

Date: 5/13/2018 1:53:00 AM

Congratulations, Pandita! :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:12:00 PM

Hi Moon Flower, I very much appreciate your nice compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2018 10:19:00 PM

All seems calm...but it’s only an illusion! Great and congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:11:00 PM

Hi Kim, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Hugs. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 7:06:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2018 7:08:00 PM

Thank you so much my sweet friend! I wish you a wonderful Mother's Day with love, hugs, and many blessings! Pandita

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/12/2018 2:58:00 PM

Sharp ink Pandita! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2018 5:14:00 PM

Hi Maureen, thank you for visiting and thank you for your kind complimentary words, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:37:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your great win, ... eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2018 2:39:00 PM

Thank you - thank you, my dear friend! I wish you a most happy Mother's Day! Blessings, hugs, and most of all - love! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:32:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Pandita :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2018 8:38:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Have a great weekend and hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/12/2018 2:27:00 AM

Congratulations Pandita. Tom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2018 7:37:00 AM

Many thanks, Tom! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:25:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win, Pandita. Well done.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thank you - thank you! Hugs. Pandita

Anil Deo

Date: 5/9/2018 8:23:00 PM

the last line has the classic "haiku surprise." Great painting ... shalom, shanthi Om

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/10/2018 7:25:00 AM

Hi Anil, thank you so very much for your kind complimentary words, my friend! I always find haiku writing to be very challenging; therefore, before I pen any haiku, I do review haiku written by the masters for guidance on the principles, especially about "haiku surprise." Have a very nice day! Pandita

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/7/2018 8:33:00 PM

Sad but true. ...

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 8:40:00 PM

Dear Pashang, thank you my friend for your support and kind comments which I appreciate! Hugs. Pandita

Kishan Sharma

Date: 5/7/2018 8:05:00 PM

Nice

Kishan Sharma
Date: 5/7/2018 8:25:00 PM

Yes its nice actually I see recently your work thanks for your reply have a good day Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 8:13:00 PM

Hi Kishan, I very much appreciate your nice compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/7/2018 6:06:00 PM

Hi Pandita, In a few words you painted such a heartfelt picture. Well done:-)Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 8:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment and continued support for my work. Hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2018 5:33:00 PM

Pandita. this one is simply brilliant! Wow.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 8:23:00 PM

Hi Andie, I greatly appreciate your wonderful superlative compliment! Thank you so much! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/7/2018 4:13:00 PM

Whales are beautiful and should be protected - thank you for your stirring and necessary message-

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 8:25:00 PM

Hi Michelle, thank you for visiting and thank you for your kind complimentary words, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/7/2018 2:39:00 PM

I actually thought killing whales had been outlawed. If not, it ought to be. Sad poem, Pandita. Nice to see you again:)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, dear Daniel, for commenting on this piece! You are right - the International Whaling Commission banned commercial whaling over 30 years ago; but there are countries such as Iceland, Japan, and Norway (they use harpoon grenades that are supposed to kill whales "efficiently") that still support commercial whaling and seek to lift the ban. Have a good evening, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/7/2018 2:02:00 PM

Such a sad finish for these beautiful creatures Pandita, you've created a beautiful image though. Tom.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 2:05:00 PM

It is so sad indeed that too many of these creatures end in a horrible way! Thank you Tom for visiting and commenting on this piece! Have a great day! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2018 12:49:00 PM

Wow, I love your written art, Pandita, very well said..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 1:31:00 PM

My dear Eve, thank you so very much for your superlative compliments! Blessings and hugs, my friend! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 5/7/2018 12:35:00 PM

Oh that final line is so so sad Pandita - man has so much to answer for:-( hugs jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 12:38:00 PM

Truly, my friend, - sometimes, unfortunately, we take one step forward and a couple backwards! Many people have no empathy for animals. Thank you for your kind comments, dear Jan. Love and hugs. Pandita

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/7/2018 12:20:00 PM

Oh I hope not harpoons. Wow u picture it so imaginatively. Beautiful haiku. Nice to read from u again, Pleez do write your thoughts/comment on my newest poem if u can relate and all.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/7/2018 12:31:00 PM

Zaynab, I appreciate your kind complimentary words, my friend! It is so appalling that in this day and age when there is so much outcry about taking care of the Earth and our natural resources, and there are still some people who continue to hunt whales and other endangered species for various reasons including profit and sport. It has to stop! Best regards! Pandita