Haiku

evasive brown eyes disguising fake love feeling hidden with grin smile For haiku poetry contest Sponsored by Mick Talbot April 24, 2018

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Date: 5/15/2018 7:53:00 PM

Nice

Date: 5/14/2018 9:40:00 PM

Love the adjectives! Nicely done!

Date: 5/12/2018 10:24:00 PM

A lot of wisdom in so few words. Congratulations!

Date: 5/1/2018 7:42:00 PM

great imagery , Nayda, congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Date: 4/29/2018 6:12:00 PM

Hey, Nayda. I wish I saw you around more! Congrats for your win here. I enjoyed seeing your human nature haiku.

Date: 4/28/2018 8:17:00 PM

Hello Nayda,those words are so true. Have a nice evening my friend.

Date: 4/27/2018 5:47:00 PM

A very perceptive haiku.

Date: 4/27/2018 2:07:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Nayda, we chose a similar theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 4/27/2018 8:38:00 AM

Congrats!

Date: 4/27/2018 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A unique haiku.

Date: 4/27/2018 6:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Nayda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 4/26/2018 11:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nayda. Well done.

Date: 4/25/2018 1:59:00 PM

- Bad behavior, Nayda - Well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)