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Haiku 004 at the Spring farm

Charmaine Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop  - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Haiku 004 at the Spring farm

the chickadee tweets

i eat my breakfast

without an egg

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  1. Date: 3/5/2014 5:40:00 PM
    Hi Charmaine, I still Love these Haiku. I'm so sad really. If the egg was there I'd cook it. That's just me. Ten words and I see the vision before me. I just love how you all do it. As I always say, It takes me twenty words to say hello, or is that good morning, whatever. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:16:00 PM
    I totally get the whole vibe of this haiku. I was pleasantly surprised when I read this one. P.S. -- I am very glad if you enjoy: "Kiss The Sky". Jimi loves you!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Haha! So you killed the cow to let the chickadee live? At least a cow provides a lot more meals.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 1:56:00 PM
    On such a day who has time for eggs? Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:32:00 AM
    To my FAVs! Great one, Charmaine! Very nice! Ruben.

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    klu klu thankyou for the favourite :)
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:20:00 AM
    hahaha, I am not sure I would be affected that way, but this is COOL

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    meat.. darn my typos :)
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I eat them too don't worry :)..I always wished to be a vegetarian but i love meet too much..O positive blood type! :)
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:51:00 AM
    Pancakes, cream of wheat and toast.. Can't forget the bacon.. I can see it.. Good write, makes me hungry again!!!.. :JP}

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/12/2012 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    bacon is yummy especially grilled.Wish i was a vegeterian but really can't do :)
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 6:53:00 AM
    How ?

    Dey  Avatar Chittaranjan Dey
    Date: 4/12/2012 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind reply.
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/12/2012 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Eating no eggs and saving the little chick's life :).. but i do eat eggs in reality .. it was just a thought when i saw a little chick in a farm on a magazine..I felt sorry that i eat eggs and don't let them bacome a chickadee :)tried to describe my feeling in this haiku :)