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Haiku 003 Our Lips

Our lips touch beneath a summer moon silent joy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/18/2016 7:56:00 PM
A beautiful and brilliant haiku...would love to see more from you...
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Date: 3/6/2014 2:02:00 PM
beautiful...Japanese envy! !
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Date: 3/5/2013 9:33:00 PM
Lovely x 100
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:15:00 PM
haiku or senryu/a million dollar question.../my hanged laptop----:)
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:14:00 PM
Very nice!!!
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Date: 4/14/2012 1:53:00 PM
"Isn't it romantic." playing in the background. Very lovely. Love, daver
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
Silent joy. So wonderful, Charma.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 3:59:00 PM
TNKS DEAR
Date: 4/12/2012 9:52:00 AM
Always a joyful time when the lips of lovers unite.. I really enjoyed this one my friend..:JP]
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 3:59:00 PM
TNKS JARED
Date: 4/12/2012 6:51:00 AM
hummm.....nice feeling.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 7:04:00 AM
thanks for reading :)
Date: 4/12/2012 6:45:00 AM
Sweet one. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 7:04:00 AM
thanks sweet Anne.. getting to your poetry soon:)

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