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Haiku 001

a distant bell tolls
in ground shaking momenta
soft clouds drift on by.

© Harry J Horsman 2012   

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  1. Date: 8/27/2014 8:26:00 PM
    Great job, Harry; beautiful images. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/26/2014 5:17:00 PM
    I'm glad to see this gorgeous haiku got a high placement. CONGRATS

  1. Date: 8/25/2014 5:01:00 AM
    Beautiful expression creating a scene with apt images, harry. congrats

  1. Date: 8/24/2014 8:01:00 PM
    sounds relaxing I imagine laying down in a grassy field by a church watching the sky. grats on your win ;)

  1. Date: 8/24/2014 3:58:00 PM
    Harry, please accept my huge congratulations for taking this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

  1. Date: 8/24/2014 3:30:00 PM
    A lovely way in displaying a soft flowing shadow, at a distant. Harry, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 6:54:00 AM
    So soft!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:31:00 PM
    I still haven't got the hang of these, I will just have to live vicariously through you.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:01:00 AM
    YEAH! haiku!! just drop the capital [A] and the period!!! [aww Harry i have so much heart I have to stay inside away from people grrr I can't ahndle large groups at all! Thank you I think you were saying you see my heart?..hopefull I didn't embarress our friend I took his name off!..really it was to all poets!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:43:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 11:04:00 AM
    Harry, are you starting from scratch with your haiku? "Haiku 001" -- hey, you did a great job here. I enjoy how the cut/juxt isn't too severe and wide....flows together well(it isn't a cut/juxt like: "the thrush warbles -- refrigerator" haha!).

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:28:00 AM
    The bell of disaster rings from distant, heard by no one and goes on. When danger shakes life, recovers gradually there after. I feel from this wonderful poem. Am I right? Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:14:00 PM
    Can't believe nobody else has seen this one except me yet. So did you google Heloise and Abelard? You have to read their story, Harry! It's incredible what they went through.

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 10:37:00 PM
    this is GORGEOUS, Harry!!!!