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Haiku -Between Our Toes

lapping waves on shore first coloured corals crunch between our toes

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Date: 4/6/2017 8:42:00 AM

You've taken me to a very nice place, thank you.

Date: 4/5/2017 5:32:00 PM

The image conjured by your words leaves me with a warm cozy feeling. Emile.

Date: 4/5/2017 2:14:00 PM

Ohh, that sound is lovely, the picture it evokes in my brain too :)

Date: 4/4/2017 11:32:00 PM

Love it! Time for a vacay.

Date: 4/4/2017 9:22:00 PM

I feel the warmth Charmaine...

Date: 4/4/2017 5:49:00 PM

love

Date: 4/4/2017 5:32:00 PM

I can imagine a couple holding hands splashing in the surf...lovely ku Charmu

Date: 4/4/2017 4:48:00 PM

Appeals to the senses...so soothing!

Date: 4/4/2017 4:31:00 PM

Soft and alluring, you bring the sea and the beauty it creates to life in your wonderful poem my sweet friend. Another "sigh" moment for me.