Haiku (Change of Season's #2)

Raindrops turn to snow Flames of autumn turn to ash Kissed by winter’s breath

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2009 3:55:00 PM

Very expressive Haiku. I love the last line. Keep writing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 9/7/2009 4:45:00 PM

Seems that nature is in syn. beautiful picture. Sincerely Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2009 9:07:00 AM

Lainie, love your Haiku. Thank you my friend for sharing with us. I am so happy to see you back at the Soup. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Date: 9/6/2009 10:19:00 AM

What an interesting view. Nice use of personification in the last line. It's good to have you back at The Soup. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/6/2009 8:49:00 AM

Hi Elaine - Beautifully written - excellent - God Bless you hon, YF4l, mj

P Sheart

Date: 9/6/2009 8:28:00 AM

Hi Elaine A lovely picture you paint here. Love the third line in this amazing Haiku. This feels like home to me. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia