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Haiku-Those Falling Leaves

hail pummels my door autumn gives way to winter ... path of burnished leaves penned 26 Oct 2018 contest: haiku or senyru.

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Chris Hagy

Date: 11/8/2018 9:15:00 PM

Hi Seren :) Nice haiku :) I love the paths of leaves...too bad winter comes next! :0 Hope your doing well :) C.H.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2018 1:54:00 PM

- Yes, the winter is approaching ... we will have frost this weekend - A visit I do not look forward to - A excellent haiku - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/26/2018 10:34:00 AM

Better call the neighbor .. excellent Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/26/2018 12:51:00 PM

lol Tim that's true. indeed we have had gross hailstones today temp is 8 with chill factor much lower. i tried to centre poem but couldnt so gave up lol

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/26/2018 9:14:00 AM

Vivid! Wonderfully done. Good luck in the contest, xomo

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/26/2018 12:52:00 PM

thank you so much. Maureen...Seren