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Haiku- Sunset

sky of swirling pinks deep purple and gold drifting - the sun falls asleep _______________________ November 16, 2015 Poetry/Haiku/sunset Copyright Protected, ID 15-7269-44-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. For the contest, Sunset, sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron Third Place

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Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 7:01:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 3:44:00 PM

Kim thanks for the beautiful and the congrats ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 10:08:00 AM

GREAT win and poem, Constance. have fun while I am away!! (and tell me all the news!)

Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2015 5:33:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the comment and have a great vacation, miss you already ~

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 4:11:00 AM

amazing imagery Broken, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT

Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2015 5:34:00 PM

Skat, thanks so much for the amazing and the congrats ~

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2015 8:51:00 PM

Magnificent! Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2015 5:36:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the magnificent and the congratulations ~

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/23/2015 8:45:00 PM

Congrats B.O for the nice piece. You never miss to win a contest. Congratulation again. Anisha

Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2015 5:37:00 PM

Anisha, thanks for the congratulations ~

George Aul

Date: 11/23/2015 4:56:00 PM

Congrats, I did not fall asleep while reading your haiku........... George

John Lawless

Date: 11/23/2015 2:36:00 PM

...not easily impressed....that sun...probably had a tough day at the beach. Nicely done BW

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 2:56:00 PM

John, you are so funny, I wish I had you around at the end of a horrible day of work, quite sure you would cheer me up, thanks for the nicely

Lin Lane

Date: 11/23/2015 11:48:00 AM

Well written, BW. Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 11:56:00 AM

Lin thanks for visiting and for the congratulations ~

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2015 10:50:00 AM

Like it even more each time I read it, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 11:57:00 AM

Thanks James ~

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/23/2015 10:03:00 AM

Aww-the sun falls asleep! Congrats Wings!

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 10:15:00 AM

Hi Balveen, thanks for the congrats !!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/23/2015 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations in the placement of the contest Broken Wings.

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 10:17:00 AM

Nayda, thank you so much for selecting my haiku for placement in your contest, I am truly honored ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2015 8:10:00 PM

very cute ending line. You chose a purple type sunset same as me. It's the color of fantasy!

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:07:00 AM

Thank you for visiting Andrea and for the sweet comment, appreciate ~

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/18/2015 1:17:00 AM

Love the haiku :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2015 1:15:00 PM

Debbie thanks so much

James Inman

Date: 11/17/2015 9:38:00 AM

I share Casarah's comment, BW. I don't think it could be described better.

Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2015 9:56:00 AM

Thanks James for visiting and for the forever support ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/16/2015 6:49:00 PM

A beautiful word arrangement. Love the way you described the sunset.

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:03:00 PM

Duke thank you so much for that beautiful comment ~

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2015 3:52:00 PM

Absolutely delightful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan, appreciate the support ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/16/2015 3:02:00 PM

- Beautiful! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:44:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I love that word beautiful, thank you for visiting ~

Lu Loo

Date: 11/16/2015 2:42:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, very wonderful entry :)-LU

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:44:00 PM

Laura, oh wonderful is a word I love, thanks for the visit ~

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/16/2015 2:28:00 PM

Beautifully said, a perfect bedtime story :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:46:00 PM

Casarah, beautifully said, I love that, thank you ~

Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/16/2015 1:57:00 PM

Simply, lovely...:), jill

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thanks Jill, I love that word lovely ~