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satisfying my appetite for more craving for whats beyond the door listening to my inner being ignoring what im really seeing testing the hand of fate so far can anyone relate admiring the next mans car running but not going too far seizing the moment to own it never was one to quit preying on the ignorance of others becoming one with my lover sanctioned by the government questioning where i where i went living life on lifes terms biting the rotten apple to eat the worms saying i never make a promise thats a comfort to a fool writing what my mind delivers at times it makes me shiver laughing at everything just to see what emotions it brings observing how you profile yourself breathing cause its great for my health just a little poem for a laugh or two!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 5/24/2009 11:24:00 AM
It made me chuckle Brandy, kool poem - James
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Date: 5/24/2009 10:22:00 AM
Ha! Ho! Hehe! Ha! Ho! Hehe! Ha! Ho! Hehe! Ha! Ho! Hehe!Ha! Ho! Hehe! Ha! Ho! Hehe!Ha! Ho! Hehe!Ha! Ho! Hehe! OK enough already!!! I loved the poem and your honesty. Go girl and live your life with zest. (...try to keep God in there somewhere, too...Preferably at your side. He wants us to be happy.) Very nice write. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 5/24/2009 9:28:00 AM
great expression, keep up your good work Abe
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