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Haha [3/27/07] you say you didnt lie oh no not once i knw this isnt true maybe its just a hunch but im not intirely stupid or blonde out of my mind i may be a little slow but i will get it if you give me time you kind of screwed me over and left me haning there well now at least im sober no longer with a care because the moment you gave me room my eyes began to wonder another great adventure i was ready to plunder and then i layed eyes on him the cutest of them all tossed you in the recycle bin and now im having a ball By:Krystyna Luke

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Date: 2/23/2009 4:43:00 PM
I liked the outcome of this, I think I would have tossed him too. Cute write Krys
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Date: 2/23/2009 4:27:00 PM
fun and hopeful. Love how you tossed him in the bin. you might want to capilize your i's however and myabe look at punuation. Catherine
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