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Hachiko

A young Akita Brought to Tokyo in March So loved and cared for Professor Uneo tried Hachiko did not fetch balls In time he escaped Now larger, he searched the town Found the train station There his masters scent vanished He waited till the last train When he saw master Greetings of joy and surprise Then the walk to home Hachiko did this each night Impressing the professor Everyone knew him Giving snacks to Hachiko Months and months passed by Until one cold winters night When the last train came and left No master to greet Hachiko walked home alone There had been a stroke Each night Hachiko would wait Eyes fixed on the last trains doors His loyalty strong He would go to the station Never faltering Day after day, he waited Years passed, loyalty strengthened Died at eleven The town, used to his presence Put up a sculpture Precisely where he would wait Hachiko's day is March Eighth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/27/2010 9:54:00 PM
Ohh :( ...this is such a bittersweet write, Mitch :) I can't help but feel heartened yet sad at the same time--dogs really are man's best friend, how I hope our loyalty can be comparable to those of the dogs...thanks for telling me about this tanka of yours--sure beats mine (haha which is also good that you were able to view it ^_~)
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:54:00 AM
Excellent story. We could all take lessons from the noble canine. Imagine for a moment a world filled with people with the unconditional love and loyalty of the dog! There would be no divorce or adultery or child abuse.
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:12:00 PM
Hey was this for that one contest. It makes for an interesting read, Mitch. Good story .And thanks so much for visting my blog. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:51:00 PM
Clever this is what I need . I will look over it with joy. At to my favs...Thank you on .Never read tankas before. Also thank you for many of your comments. A pleasure reading and learning.
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:08:00 AM
That was actually based on a true story, was truly amazing.
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:07:00 AM
I saw that movie and balled my eyes out- you captured the mood and idea so well here. Great job!
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:44:00 PM
Sweet and wonderful tale ..very heartwarming Mitch. .. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/24/2010 2:14:00 PM
What a heartfelt tale....this sounds like a legend that has been passed down...brings a tear to the eye, a picture of him sitting and waiting. A sweet, sad, but tender poem, Mitch! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:32:00 AM
Interesting write...Great idea and very good presentation...Dogs are great and what they know from scent is amazing...Their faithfulness should be an example to mankind..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 5:57:00 AM
sad story--enjoyed
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