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Gypsy

Ahoy listen to the sounds of bird song the screaming of the gulls way out to sea let your mind drift to distant times and long for freer times when you were a gypsy Now bound by love you left the road behind no longer travelling by caravan your life now is not free but confined you sit hoping waiting for the mailman A fiery wanton beauty you once were you no longer know who you have become remembering past times as fast they blur to their memories you have to succumb Wanton gypsy dance with me by firelight pleasure me as we dally in moonlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/16/2013 3:56:00 PM
Yes! This works very well. Thanks for considering my thoughts.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/16/2013 5:35:00 PM
appreciate your input Rick ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 11/16/2013 2:34:00 PM
Third stanza line two is somehow blocking the flow of this piece for me. I really love the rest of the poem.
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Date: 11/16/2013 3:30:00 PM
hi Rick maybe you will prefer the alteration I made ty for pointing it out Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 5:03:00 AM
Interesting work..The heart of a gypsy trapped in the daily grind..Sad..Thanks for stopping by.Your comments were uplifting..The Cherokee printing press was seized because of what they were printing..Soon afterwards the Cherokee were rounded up and sent to a reservation out in the western territory..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/16/2013 2:18:00 PM
Whites have a lot to answer for Sara basically we pillaged and raped the American Native People and shoved them out of the way all for so called progress ty for reading gypsy Shadow x smile
Date: 11/15/2013 5:25:00 PM
- .... free as a bird ..... no bills in the mailbox .... Lovely poem, Shadow. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/16/2013 2:20:00 PM
Ty Anne Lise fr reading have a super weekend Shadow x smile hug

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