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gym experience

My heart aches
I am fat
It's already too late!

The workout kills
The instructor is hunky

My stomach churns
I am overweight
It is not even funny

The weights are stuck to the floor
The stretch ribbons won't stretch anymore

My jiggly parts burns

Screw this, I'm out for the door!
Let's go out and have a food war

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Good morning,Qui i enjoyed your poem }i{, have yourself a lovely day~ALWAYS *PD

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 3:39:00 PM
    Oh no!! Better to get the weight off for certain. ha ha Keep going. Don't give up.

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    Date: 6/6/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aha thanks! I'll keep trying! :)