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Guys Take It Easy This Is My First Kyrielle

Along came a fire and I sat Down beside her, the Earth's lava. I move like a mule and a cat. Not ever a care or botha.' Wives and kids and money to be made. Spinning dishes on poles evermore. I stand a-muck with heart dismayed. My compass smashed and far from shore. I sit here now writing this poem. Kyrielle? Why not? What the hell? Just two lines left in this flotsam. Geez, I typed this slow as a snell.

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Date: 9/3/2023 5:04:00 AM
You did the form very well
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Matt Caliri
Date: 9/3/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thanks!!!
Date: 8/29/2023 7:04:00 AM
a fun and funny poem, Matt. Glad you liked my Ku.
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Date: 8/15/2023 10:54:00 AM
Those last lines made me chuckle! How real is this, what we all really go think when we try new forms. And i love the rhymes there especially! Creative.
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Matt Caliri
Date: 8/16/2023 9:42:00 PM
Thanks, Empress!!! I try to end on a fun note.

Book: Shattered Sighs