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Guy Advice To a Friend

You tried to win her over with dark chocolate and daisies Passion on beds of clover always works with the ladies So why her indiscretions She revealed it with a sigh You didn't ask the right questions the rule book doesn't apply See beneath all that glitters her cool choreographed style It's not hidden in twitters try looking beyond her smile Her love you cannot purchase She can sense if you are fake Do not play on the surface dive down deep into her lake Once she's truly discovered surely passions will run deep The depths of her uncovered whispered secrets you must keep She'll give you what you wish for there is magic in her soul If you just reveal your core together you will be whole Don't ever try to change her that person she'll never be If you try, she'll leave for sure for that girl needs to be free! Contest: "Men your advice to another man on females" Sponsor: Brenda Chiri Written December 18, 2018

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/9/2018 6:16:00 PM

hi Richard it is beautiful rhyming with deep meaning containing wisdom. My Fav. i love it. Good morning to you as well , i will let you know once i have new piece. i really enjoyed your cooperation. "Her love you cannot purchase She can sense if you are fake Do not play on the surface dive down deep into her lake"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2018 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Muhammad, I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. For me I do not wish to control the person I am with. It is amazing to witness a flower blooming before me.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2018 6:29:00 PM

Now I'm the one to be impressed, Richard. A brilliant poem with sage advice.. the way to a woman's heart is through her soul - so yes, 'Do not play on the surface - dive down into her lake!'.. Your poem is beautifully expressed; words of wisdom born of an insightful and responsive heart. Belated congrats on your wonderful trophy win. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2018 6:44:00 PM

Sorry for late response. Thanks for such an uplifting response.

Marc Acrich

Date: 2/15/2018 9:09:00 AM

Nice one A poem full of life

Melissa Tracy

Date: 1/25/2018 12:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Such beauty within your words so much deeper than a smile :) Best wishes!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/20/2018 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations and best wishes for your win, Richard - I hope your holidays were great! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/18/2018 1:15:00 AM

Congratulations, Richard on your great win and position. You are so right ...that person she'll never be.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/17/2018 9:41:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Richard. Masterfully done.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/16/2018 1:10:00 PM

Congrats Rick for a great win!!

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/15/2018 5:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Rhoda. It was a nice surprise.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 1/14/2018 11:18:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, but since you wrote it so well, your win was inevitable, a very brilliant write, your advise was really good, that don t change her, love her how they are and even we shouldn t change ourselves for anybody else, continue to write as yours poems are really good, good luck and thanks for commenting on my poem

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:36:00 AM

A great comment, thanks for the visit.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/14/2018 2:12:00 AM

Hi Richard, I told you this was a winner. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thanks Alexis.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/13/2018 10:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Richard on your fine win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thanks Subimal.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2018 10:25:00 PM

Great advice, Richard, never change her . Congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug back.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/13/2018 9:37:00 PM

Despite impressive poem quality, after reading comments I must, have to, shout "WOMEN ARE NOT ALL THE SAME, MEN ARE NOT ALL THE SAME." I have a high tolerance for differences, but apparently, I have none for sameness. Sorry to be inappropriate at your congratulations party, I did try very hard to behave. Also, I seem to be the only one who went to the gutter after reading 'dive down deep in her lake'- just happily jumped on in. Oh Tim, Tim was already laying in there! Curtsy, exit stage right

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/15/2018 7:06:00 PM

I have verbally spanked my entire self entirely for leaving these comments and shared same with Brenda. Thank you for your diplomatically worded response, if I had but done the same ....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:46:00 AM

I have never met two women who are the same and that is a good thing. I enjoyed your provocative comment CayCay.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2018 8:12:00 AM

This is a great , well written poem with excellent advice. Good luck in the contest Richard :) Happy New Year!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Heidi.

Carol B.

Date: 1/1/2018 2:42:00 PM

Fantastic poem and excellent advice. Happy New Year Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/11/2018 9:00:00 AM

Hi Carol, sorry I missed this one.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/30/2017 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful advice from a true gentleman, Richard. Lovely. I'm in Germany at the moment. Spending New Year with family here. Wishing you the best in the new year, dear.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2018 2:49:00 PM

I hope you are having a great time Eileen. Hugs Ric.

Becca Teagan

Date: 12/27/2017 10:55:00 AM

"dive down deep into her lake" yes, and search for her hidden treasures, this is what makes passion come alive. Very good advice to the men, Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2017 12:47:00 PM

Thanks Becca, I’ve always wanted to be a deep sea diver.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/26/2017 3:40:00 PM

Hey, bruh where was you when I needed this advice forty years ago ... lol! Splendid wisdom offered in this mighty fine poem, Richard. Words of truth always echo w/faithful affirmations. And so it is w/this beautiful poem. Love and peace always.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/26/2017 4:03:00 PM

As always your comments shine. Thanks for your visits today Freddie.

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 12/26/2017 10:01:00 AM

Love it

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/26/2017 4:03:00 PM

Thanks Ingrid.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/26/2017 12:30:00 AM

EXCELLENT advice Richard! You appear to know and understand a women's heart well Richard. I hope this really does well in the contest for it is very deserving. I hope your Christmas was merry and bright! Blessings, Connie

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/26/2017 4:02:00 PM

Yes we had a lovely Christmas with our son in his new home. I hope yours was good as well.