Gutted

I am a fish out of water, Hanging with my mouth open wide. Eyes hardly seeing, Swishing to and fro, Waiting to be gutted, on this open boat.

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Black Matta

Date: 8/27/2015 5:06:00 AM

I like it! Poor fish >(xxx).>

Sam Villegas
Date: 8/27/2015 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Black matta :). rip the fish.

Suburban Lovechild

Date: 7/25/2015 7:31:00 PM

I can feel the ocean freeze as the fish flops, awaiting his fate. Nice write.

Sam Villegas
Date: 7/26/2015 2:29:00 PM

Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2015 6:24:00 PM

Samantha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sam Villegas
Date: 7/24/2015 8:34:00 PM

A warm welcome to you aswell, thank you.

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 2:58:00 PM

Samantha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sam Villegas
Date: 7/24/2015 8:33:00 PM

Thank you ^-^. Pleased to meet you aswell.