Guns

What a drag they are Pressure rises until death Sleep peacefully now

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Date: 2/27/2013 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...David

John Monteblanco
Date: 2/28/2013 6:18:00 PM

Thank you

Date: 2/26/2013 4:41:00 PM

congrats on your win, John.

John Monteblanco
Date: 2/28/2013 6:19:00 PM

Thank you

Date: 2/26/2013 11:01:00 AM

Congrats on the win!!

John Monteblanco
Date: 2/28/2013 6:21:00 PM

Thank you!!

Date: 2/26/2013 10:33:00 AM

Many congratulations on your number 1 John xx

John Monteblanco
Date: 2/28/2013 6:21:00 PM

And many thanks to you

Date: 2/25/2013 9:07:00 PM

Great emotion expressed in this entry, John...Thanks for taking time out for my contest and creating a strong haiku. It is powerful! gwendolen

John Monteblanco
Date: 2/28/2013 6:20:00 PM

Thank you for the recognition

Date: 2/25/2013 9:06:00 PM

John, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Date: 1/22/2013 1:57:00 PM

Nice to see you here John,,,, it's been a long time... about your haiku..... guns are bad,, and can kill the best of us.... always~LINDA

John Monteblanco
Date: 2/28/2013 6:19:00 PM

Thanks, it's good to be back!