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A gun so nice to hold Firm grip from one so bold Shiny bullets fingers do enfold To only the brave guns are sold Not only to the brave are coffins sold Silk lined some are, but still rot and mould Not only bought for the unfortunate ill, we’re told Not a perk for those growing infirm or old Lives wiped out gone feelings left cold Guns to the brave are always sold Coffins the innocents do enfold Firm to the grip, handles cold A gun so nice to hold A body not, I am told. ©~GG~ 16/01/2013 Contest Entry:

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Date: 4/16/2020 2:37:00 AM
Another read from my fav's list Mandy,,,easy to see and feel, why you are Golden...
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Date: 2/27/2013 10:21:00 AM
Lovely write MAndy! Congrats on your win. -- Sean
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Date: 2/26/2013 6:17:00 PM
congrats on your win Mandy
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:29:00 PM
the first one not a haiku that I am seeing. I remember this one from before. It's neat to see all of us number one!! Congrats, Mandy
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:57:00 AM
well done! very creative write my friend Mandy..like the form and very informative. Super Congrats on your grand win. Hugs from me to you, Maria (^_^)
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:22:00 AM
Mandy ,Congrats on the win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:32:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:55:00 AM
Mandy this is a powerful write. Congratulation. Connie
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:02:00 PM
Many congrats Mandy for this well deserved win
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:36:00 PM
Cleverly constructed! Chocked full of meaning! Congratulations, RAY
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:00:00 PM
Mandy, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2013 8:23:00 PM
well done Mandy ....Seren
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Date: 2/25/2013 7:50:00 PM
Mandy the golden gal....appreciated this powerful couplet entry for my contest and all the effort u put forth...u should be very proud! Please read my lil blog. God's blessings to u and your family! gwendolen
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Date: 1/18/2013 12:01:00 AM
hey, I really like the way this one enfolds and how you formatted it back to smaller lines. Very cool!! an intelligent poem.
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Date: 1/17/2013 2:49:00 AM
i made a reply comment in mine Mandy, its not the gun that kills its the finger that pulls the trigger. Nice write hun...Seren
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Date: 1/16/2013 10:44:00 AM
What a finish !! You wrapped up the topic so well. I'm still of the thought that guns don't kill, people do. The gun not having a life of it's own, yet held in the wrong hands...it breaths death sadly.
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Date: 1/16/2013 9:08:00 AM
this is amazing poetry, Golden Girl, you say it all here, and that last couplet just blows one away...no pun intended,,, to my fav
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Date: 1/16/2013 8:50:00 AM
Mandy you are bang on target with this one...David
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