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Gunoku

gun leaning on tree falls to the ground ducks take flight Gun-O-Ku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 4:34:00 PM

Love this great cause and effect haiku, it rocks!! Congrats, my friend

Heather Ober

Date: 2/26/2013 11:38:00 AM

I hadn't seen this one before! Wonderful job, Richard. Very clever :)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2013 10:31:00 AM

Love this one Richard!Congrats on the win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/26/2013 10:26:00 AM

Many congratulations on your number 1 Richard xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2013 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/25/2013 11:36:00 PM

One for the ducks. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 8:19:00 AM

Thanks

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/25/2013 11:04:00 PM

Many congrats Richard for this well deserved win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 8:20:00 AM

Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 9:02:00 PM

Richard, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 8:20:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/25/2013 8:12:00 PM

What a phenomenal haiku that fits the contest theme perfectly....u were one of the few that incorporated humor and u did it like a cartoonist! Way to go, Richard! I really enjoy your work! gwendolen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 8:22:00 AM

Aww thanks Gwendolen, what a sweet comment.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2013 6:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that man or duck weren't hurt..That sort of thing can be dangerous for man or animal..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2013 6:46:00 AM

The work about boredom was inspired by hearing so many young people say I am so bored..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2013 8:33:00 PM

I hope no ducks were hurt in the making of this poem. haha. I LIKES!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/19/2013 3:36:00 PM

This is a tremendous display of amnesty for the ducks! I love how you have given them at least a chance to get away, ha ha ha! This is a fascinating poem, a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 3:52:00 PM

Thanks Russel, more ducks for your little dog to chase.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/19/2013 3:09:00 PM

i love your gun0ku:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 3:51:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine, I appreciate the visit.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2013 2:39:00 PM

i will had to Anne Lise comment below,, clever poet also...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Harry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2013 12:39:00 PM

Clever ducks ...... fly fast ..... fly high .... - - - Luck in contest Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, we can all use a bit of luck

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2013 11:53:00 AM

Richard, another interesting haiku like poem. I also want to thank you so much for my placement in your Tetrazelle Fantasy Contest, I am very honored. Constance

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 3:54:00 PM

No thank you required, your excellent poem deserves the credit.