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Gun Rope Razor OD take 2

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Gun Rope Razor OD take 2

Sometimes I feel

like telling you

go on

just do it

get on with it

get it over with

if you want to finish your life

I don't give a ....

other times

I want to solve it for you

fix whatever is wrong

make you happy

lead you to Jesus

let you find salvation

but you may never find

happiness because

you love misery 

boredom and

feeling sick

it makes you happy

in your miserable kind of way

I'm not sure where this is going

but it will

come to me

God will tell me

one day


just need





Am I even right

in trying to help

or ignore you

who am I to

force my thoughts

upon you

or to wash you

down the drain

and forsake you 




I try to force

my belief upon you

isn't that just selfish

on my part and

nothing new

what should I do

other than encourage you

empathize  and listen

for if you talk it through

after awhile

your teeth might glisten




that was a cheesy line 

in a heavy subject matter

and I can't pretend to think

even for a moment 

that I know better

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