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Gull Flight

The gull's wings undulating moving graceful symmetry soaring ever higher now following instinct

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 11/26/2019 10:42:00 AM

oh, I like how you think about my haiku's subject, had not thought of it in this way:) I was fascinated by the gull's gracefulness in flight!

Rituko Shindo
Date: 11/27/2019 6:51:00 AM

A Haiku teacher said that Haiku was something that readers could interpret without the writer's permission. Ha ha ha ha

Rituko Shindo

Date: 11/26/2019 6:07:00 AM

In the life consultation of the newspaper, a famous female writer in Japan answered to the worried person that lost in her way of life, “Even birds and insects go in the direction that they want to . So live as you like. ” I remembered that when I read this poem .

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2019 4:38:00 PM

Ahhh!! I can see the scene. Sara

Carol Fillmore
Date: 5/18/2019 4:47:00 PM

Sara, as I sat on the back deck (either last summer or the previous one) I watched a gull do this and it was wonderful to watch! Graceful, effortless and this inspired the write. Thank you for the kind words. Find I'm inspired by nature very often!