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Guilty Pleasure

Today I won't care if my hair's a mess I wont worry that my clothes aren't pressed I don't give a damn that I've argued with my man There's a cheesecake in the fridge and it absolutely cooing Its calling out my name while my tea is gently brewing Mmm the creaminess is the symphony of my favourite song The crumbly biscuit base will just melt as it touches my tongue Just the very thought of me and my favourite pie takes the stresses of the day and waves them all bye bye So don't bother me with triviality or remind me of the chores I should be doing As I snuggle on my comfy chair and do some cheesecake wooing and as I take that first bite to heaven I am sent Sensational raptures, play their tune while vanilla hues waft and content my senses so relaxed body tingles, the taste so good I'd have you every day if I could but then I guess you wouldn't be so special the treat I look so forward to My guilty little pleasure Mmmm just me and you

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Date: 3/5/2010 11:21:00 AM
there are a whole bunch f ways to follow the some of specific lines in here! Great writing, very climatic, so to speak! Loving this style! Irish
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Date: 2/23/2010 3:52:00 PM
Strawberry Cheesecake is McYummy Allie, i feel a craving coming on now >> tasty poem >> James
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:54:00 AM
good write and you are absolutly right, cheesecake is the bomb! i like to make mine with strawberries on top and drizzle some chocolate syrup...Mmmmmm! but i started buying it every week and it's not that amazing anymore, but i still love it,and good poem! =)
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Date: 1/22/2010 5:29:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening Allie. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:43:00 PM
A very wooing write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2010 9:01:00 AM
ps. hey, that was cool how a "cheese"man below here found this poem!
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Date: 1/22/2010 9:00:00 AM
GREAT writing. Anything with food, I am sure to like. Keep it up! andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:23:00 AM
Go on spoil yourself lady sacrifice yourself to the food God's, great piece enjoyed Daniel
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