Guilty

Guilty!!! Guilt turns to anger then turns to stupidity! If it was good nothing would be wrong! If you had stopped he wouldn't be gone! You are guilty! Lives are ruined! Believe these feelings and make amends before it's too late! Chances are slipping away like the life that is gone. Guilty!!! -

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 12:52:00 PM

carol, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Carol Deason
Date: 6/30/2017 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much! This was my first attempt at poetry in a very long time!

Cona Adams

Date: 1/12/2015 9:09:00 AM

Hi, Carol. Second chances usually bring good results. But, don't take too much guilt upon yourself. It takes two to tango! You have an easy flow in your writing of free verse, my favorite form to write.

Carol Deason
Date: 6/30/2017 10:32:00 AM

Thank you!

Ty Townsend

Date: 1/10/2015 2:28:00 PM

Guilt is always one of those ever attacking forces. You written it perfectly how it can be a painstaking annoyance but a teacher in some ways.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/10/2015 11:13:00 AM

Very nice pen Carol! Enjoyed your piece dear friend!Have a lovely weekend! :) Love and light! xxx D.