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The musty lights corrupt the stage Twisting the form of the heavy curtains Framed by the stolen shadows of cherubs A delicate music box whispers into the guilded room A faint perfume of smoldering limes bitter the air This night could be Prague, Vienna... Then I conquer the stage, arise and fulfill the lights Only to again to have my dignity murdered infront of me Adressing a hollow room The only half-sound, glowering laughter in my mind The meadow of poppy-red seats stare through the dark The lights sharpen from their soft glow And regroup as piercing arrows Stripping me down Back to my soul I questioned why the others left (and they question why I stay) Neither are sure if it's through choice, or truth Living in this dead theatre

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/20/2009 10:14:00 AM
This piece really caught my attention- I like the descriptions.. favourite lines "the meadow of poppy-red seats" and "I questioned why the others left.(.and they question why I stay).
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Date: 10/20/2009 3:45:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Melanie. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:45:00 PM
Very nice poem. Pam
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Date: 10/19/2009 2:30:00 PM
Absorbing poem Melanie >> James
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