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Guiding Light

Guiding Light Luminescent it glows, pale ring of light Mystery rock planet, no atmosphere During the day it disappears from sight Crater dusted orb brings life to us here When the sun goes down she rises up bright Me and the moon holding hands in the night... 01/23/17

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:51:00 AM
Love the moon Brian, nice write.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/18/2017 10:31:00 PM
As do I my friend
Date: 2/2/2017 7:00:00 PM
Brian. really nice personification. Check out your poem looking at it from my view. You need to fix the format. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/18/2017 10:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea
Date: 2/1/2017 4:16:00 PM
Hi Brian, congratulations on your win....great piece, loved the imagery as well as your placement of lines.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/1/2017 6:15:00 PM
Thank you very much

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