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Guess Which One This Is Haiku

Guess Which One This Is Haiku by James Horn Here is a combined haiku that makes you think a lot. Combined haiku is what you can call my style. To read them, people will walk many a mile. A mini series Of how I have loved haiku That is very true. Maybe mysteries Trying to keep you entranced To wonder about. Was on one evening While trying to write some poems This thought came to me. What if I would write All day long into the night Would this be alright? Between you and me What great subject should it be? Having set souls free. Subject could have been So many ways we all sin Circles spin and spin. From your point of view Is there some place in haiku? Where dreams do come true. To me had been said Haiku has many morals Guess which one this is? Jmes Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet

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Date: 7/5/2015 11:21:00 AM
James, love your series of haiku's, quite wonderful, 7, yes you busted me, I say one thing and do another, I do actually think a true haiku/senyru is but 3 lines, somehow there is more skill involved but I must also go with the flow at times and there you go I write a series of haiku's/senryu's to please a sponsor, but aren't they lovely~
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James Horn
Date: 7/6/2015 6:31:00 AM
Bless all of your great comments. Yaaaa American Women soccer players. Jim
Date: 7/5/2015 8:45:00 AM
Well, it certainly gave me food for thought! :) Haiku poems are not easy to write. I've been staying away from them for some time. Great reflective write.
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Date: 7/6/2015 6:34:00 AM
Gads. Is there such a thing as a natural flow. Go Women Soccer players. Jim Horn

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