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Guarding Red Roses

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Today, I cut a bunch of roses from my rose bush on which there are still blossoms!!!! Strange sight to see... Still I'm so happy to have them... better that I enjoy them now before the frost destroys them.

The fairest of vases sits upon a mantle high While admiring eyes gaze; doors breathe a long sigh No expression nor smiles, but its presence calls To kings and serfs steadfast within encamped walls Like a beacon shines through opaque, foggy skies Captures glances of awestruck ones, mesmerized Unadorned, its beauty, most exquisite pales But guarding red roses, beauty never fails ~*~

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/9/2013 8:45:00 AM

Very nice. Excellently penned from mysterious and charming thoughts.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/29/2012 8:36:00 AM

Original, sweet! Annalise....jimbo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2012 7:51:00 AM

I am surprised at the one comment because I quite enjoyed this poem. Don't put your pen down, the rest of us are enjoying the results.

Audrey Haick
Date: 12/3/2012 8:01:00 PM

Thank you, for your kind comment, Richard. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great week! Always, Annalise

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/21/2012 12:30:00 PM

‡ Good Morning, Sweet Beautiful Annalise. A Wonderful Joy To Find Your Beauty And Your Beautiful Words, A Moment Ago In Com. Wished To Pass Back By This Treasured Fragrant Flowers Garden, To Say Thank You, For Pouring A Splash In Sunshine's Beauty Upon My Heart With Your Own Beauty's, Priceless Visit. Have A Very Beautiful Day, Sweet Beautiful Lady. Kisses And Hugs, Dipped In Love, Rachel ‡

Audrey Haick
Date: 12/3/2012 8:07:00 PM

Hey Rachel, Thank you for your kind and beautiful comments you always leave for me. You're so supportive..a true friend. Love, Annalise

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/19/2012 4:00:00 PM

* Thus, I Found Pure Joy Within Finding Your Splendours Had Paid Myself A Kind And Wonderful Visit; 'Thank You.' As For This Soon To Be Favoured Pearl Of The Orient's Beautiful Verse, Yesss, Love The Fragrant Swirling In Colours Amid The Strokes Their Metaphores. I Also Do Believe That Captivated Mesmerized Spellbound Would Most Surely Fit, 'This Beautiful View.' Sweet Kisses, Dipped In Love, Rachel *

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/19/2012 5:34:00 PM

: ) Thank you again for the visit, my friend! You know I appreciate all your visits and the chance to let you know you're in my thoughts and prayers, always.. God bless. Much love to you.

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/19/2012 3:50:00 PM

* Hello, Sweet Beautiful Annalise! I Must Admit Unto Your Most Fairest In Beauty That, As Moments Then Days Have Passed Quickly By In This Place I Have A Few Times Beheld Your Beautiful Name Along The Way; Finding A Stirring Unto A Deep Desire To Stop By And Drop A Kind Loving Word Within Your Radiant Coms Box. Yet, I Thought Better Not Since I Have Failed To Hear From Your Precious Heart; Thinking Perhaps Your Loveliness Cared Not Much For Myself Nor My Type In Verse ? ... Cont *

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/19/2012 5:31:00 PM

Hi Juan. That I do not care for thee would be a falsehood, my friend! I will admit that I have hurriedly pass through and just the same, have left to attend to the mundane tasks which it seems I'm always plagued with. Nevertheless, as I found myself here today, behold mine eyes, fell upon the beautiful verse you penned! Thank you, not for the verse alone, but the lovely comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2012 1:22:00 AM

So true, and beautiful poem Annalise. - Have a nice day. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/19/2012 1:57:00 PM

Hi, Anne Lise! Thanks for reading and understanding my poem...at least you get it.. Have a great weekend! Much love