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Grows the Night

Grows the night when breath lays quietly On obscure places fluid as winds, Where clouds of rest become a hammock Lulling frayed veins with lemongrass tea - Grows the night allowing surrender Its hypnotic intoxication The exchange of matter and being- For across the distance grows the night. Repeat the Phrase Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 9 June, 2020

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Date: 2/13/2024 1:13:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:59:00 AM
The exchange of matter and being---superb imagery to portray the night growing to unravel it's mysticism. Congrats Carly on a fine top win. Best. Mohan
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:17:00 PM
Graceful, soothing and majestic imagery Carly. This is outstanding. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/13/2020 12:38:00 PM
how eloquent, carly... congrats on winning 1st spot along with the others in my contest...huggs
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