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I have a pup called Sheeba And Muttley is her mate, And when it comes to dinner time My pups are never late. They ate my Gargoyle Monster Set, They ate my teddy-bear, They ate my pet goanna, They just didn't seem to care. They ate my budgie Hercules, They ate my mother's mat, Now they waddle everywhere, My pups are very fat. -more poems like this can be found at: kidscomedypoetry.com.au

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Date: 4/8/2015 4:14:00 AM
Loved this piece John!. I have a dog that neatly fits your great description. Best Regards my friend!.
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John Williams
Date: 4/8/2015 7:30:00 AM
Hello William, I'm glad you could relate to my poem through your own dog's actions. . I am so glad you liked the poem. Kind regards----John
Date: 12/11/2014 9:30:00 AM
Too Cute. So typical of puppies to chew everything in sight. This poetry form is a Quatrain, John. Well done!
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:32:00 AM
Hi Cona, For some reason I have just seen your comment. I am happy you liked the poem. Kind regards----John PS: i don't know what a Quatrain is, i will have to look it up.
Date: 11/29/2014 9:28:00 PM
I like this, John, awesome names,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 9:34:00 AM
Such a pleasant little poem!!! (and funny!!!)
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:04:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, John - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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